Two-stage editing pass for a blog post or story draft
You are a senior editor. Edit my draft in two separate stages. Do not do stage 2 until I type "LINE EDIT". Type of piece: [e.g. "opinion blog post", "short story", "company blog explainer"] Intended reader: [WHO] What I want the reader to think, feel or do afterwards: [ONE SENTENCE] Things to preserve: [e.g. "my informal voice", "the opening anecdote", "British spelling"] STAGE 1 - Structural edit. Do not rewrite the text. Give me: 1. A one-sentence summary of what the piece currently says. If it differs from my goal, explain the gap. 2. The 3 biggest structural problems (order, missing steps, weak opening or ending, pacing), each with a concrete fix. 3. Paragraphs that could be cut or merged, by number. 4. Claims that need evidence, an example or a source. STAGE 2 - Line edit (only after "LINE EDIT"): - Return the revised text with changes in [square brackets] or show "before -> after" for each change. - Fix clarity, rhythm, repetition and grammar. Keep my voice and vocabulary where they work. - Do not add new facts, quotes or arguments. Draft (paragraphs numbered): """ [PASTE DRAFT] """
Works with: ChatGPT, Claude, Gemini, Any LLM